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What to write??? Good story and idea....Very different ending, which is both good and kind of sad.The description of sex scenes was a bit much for me...they are becoming almost as common in stories as big breasts, etc....Thanks to the writer for posting. |
I Really Don't Know Clouds At All Details |
This review discusses certain elements of the story in a way that some may consider it a "spoiler." If you haven't read Texas Gal yet, and plan to do so, then you should skip over my comments.======= There were a lot of things about this story that I liked. I thought the character development was excellent. The author has drawn a lot of players -- almost all of them female -- in this little saga, and yet, for me at least, they all emerged as unique individuals. That's nice. I was also glad to see that the the author had given some consideration to the plot, although so far it seems pretty predictable. The ominous buildup to the end of Part One, I thought was fairly skillful. Having said all that, I have to say that there were also some things I *really* didn't care for. The "men-are-stupid-insensitive-and-mean" theme was hit much too hard, IMO. I really can't visualize a pediatrician telling her 11-year-old genetic male patient that testosterone was a substnace that made young males do foolish things. If there was supposed to be an anti-feminist theme to this piece, it was so heavy, that I suspect it may have the opposite effect on modern readers who are not already committed to the reactionary "Fascinating Womanhood" lifestyle. "Mommy" (who we're supposed to believe is an intelligent and caring mother) unabashedly steers her female children toward a life of servitude to some future "Mr. Right." She teaches them that their value rest in their physical beauty, their ability to catch a man, and how efficiently they can do the dishes and make the beds. She's obviously raising them to be Stepford Wives. And yet, the only other sympathetically drawn adult woman is Anita Clark, who isn't a housewife at all, but an MD. Might we suppose that Dr. Clark is raising *her* twin girls to view their world in the same limited way as Darla Anne and her sisters? I guesss when I read the last line of Part One, my first thoughts (evil feminist that I am) were, "Good!" and "I hope she *is!" in that order. Finally, Darla Anne was *much* too good to be true. In ten years, she never makes the inductive leap from being rejected by the boys and accepted by the girls to perhaps wishing for something more, and never tries on "Mother's panties" even once. And yet, in the space of 24 hours, she turns into Jon-Benet Ramsey, a child beauty queen so convincing that not even a doctor (fortunate combination of pediatrician and OB/Gyn) can pick up a single hint. I think this writer has a lot of ability, but needs to keep a tighter rein on his/her tendencies to romanticize all things perceived as "female". Not only are imperfect females more realistic, they're a lot more interesting. I look forward to seeing more by C. Sprite in the future. |
Texas Gal Details |
Dear Anon: Passionate, patient, sensitive, endearing, insightful, alluring, exciting, and fully entertaining. Those are just a few of the characteristics of your wonderful tale. Hunter is a pleasure to read about. Christine is a joy as well. I hung on every word and so thoroughly enjoyed the scenes of passion that I doubt I will find another author to match your captivating and prescient full bodied descriptions of true love and intimacy. We are so hoping that they get together and marry! Thank you for not teasing us too much. Yes, I found myself cheering on Hunter to kiss her already. I am glad he finally did. You have created a well crafted, well balanced and what should be a well liked story. I very highly recommend it. Thank you so much for sharing. Hugs, Kristi |
Christine's Love Details |
Hi, Suki.You did it again. Another fine story. A am a little bityealous, because I do not have a mind, to writesuch wonderfull stories, but I am glad that you can,so there is something to read for me now and then.Thank you very much again.I like this much better as everything else. JENNIFER |
Cherie's Little Problem Details |
I love the Ovid stories they are my favorite. I liked this one, but it could have been a little betterb but it was good. I hope to see plenty more stories on Ovid. So please continue writting them you are very good. |
Ovid 10: The Academician Details |
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